Note: This was a comic that was completed as part of a "7 page comic in 7 days" project I participated in with some friends, so the quality may be a little less than exemplary. For example, I mispelled the name of my own comic on the first page. Great fun anyway.

I used a different inking technique than usual (read: without brush pens) and I don't know what I think of it yet.
"Dead Alive" on the gauge is a refrence to Peter Jackson's excellent movie by the same name.
I really wanted there be a panel where Yooki said "all right, all right. Everybody calm down"... "Randy was only an intern, he's easily replaceable!" Couldn't squeeze it in though.
I knew roughly how the last page was going to end, but I didn't even script it out until the seventh day.

Points I wanted the last page to make:
1. Yooki made money off of turning pets undead, despite what Alice thought.
2. Randy is okay, and Yooki's hand is fixed.
3. Yooki is on a TV commercial, not talking to the "reader"

I don't think I made point 1 very clear at all, which is kind of dissapointing. I wasn't really thinking about it, but it really woud have been better if there was some kind of pay off that showed you he got all the money he wanted anyway. I was too worried about the "TV commercial" approach.

If this whole comic is told from Yooki's point of view, why does he make himself look like such an ass?

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